Monday 29 March 2010
I'm holding yet another competition!
Right I'm still waiting for a few more entries about the banner below. (Toys where is yours I can't find it?) Anyway I want you guys to write a poem Class 9 (My class) and about how they are the best and class 8 drool. Please don't say my online name and you can make it as funny as you want. Spelling and punctuation count! Contest will be over soon...Good luck. Winner gets the chance too be a winner...lol sorry. I'll think of something.
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Cool! Im gonna do it!!!
i am in class 9.
and my class is just fine.
you are in class eight.
you drool so much you make me irate!
class 9 has fame!
class 8 is lame.
GUESS WHAT CLASS 9 DOES? IT RULES!
GUESS WHAT CLASS 8 DOES? IT DROOLS!
class 9 we are the best!
class 8 can't do a 1 question test!
why are we the best you ask?
class 8 can't do the easiest task!
class 8 is rubbish
and now that you mention it they are nubbish!
GUESS WHAT CLASS 9 DOES? IT RULES!
GUESS WHAT CLASS 8 DOES? IT DROOLS!
class 9 rules like a viper
class 8 wears its own diaper
class 9 is so nice we share
class 8 growls at each-other like a bear
this poem is more like a song
and it is over and long
~*~*~*~
Do u like? Plz say u like cuz it took me 4eva to find rhyming wordzzzzz! RE-DONE!
kkkkkk123 wats ur tootsville name? mine is lemonlemon
Pipers poem is awesome well done!!! And thanks guys!!!
Also my Tootsville name is Piggybankgirl. I don't go on that anymore though.
Any1 on?!
Thanks Piper! Lemon!
Class 9 rocks!
Class 8 sucks!
Class 9 is the best!
Class 8 can't pass one test!
Class 9 are friendly and nice!
Class 8 are like stinky mice!
Class 9 get tens!
Class 8 run like hens!
Class 9 is so cool!
Class 8 kids just drool!
Class 9 like a good game!
Class 8 are just plain lame!
Class 9 haves fun!
Class 8 don't get anything done!
Class 9 runs fast!
Class 8 a minute won't last!
Everyone loves class 9!
Everyone hates class 8!
CLASS 9 IS SO AWESOME!
CLASS 8 IS SO NOT!
That's my poem and also if you want a shorter one:
Class 9 are so cool
Class 8 is lame and they drool
Class 9 is awesome
That's a short poem called a Haiku, you don't have to enter them both, choose the one you like best.
Class9 rules
Class8 just drools
The best in the world class 9
The worst in the world class 8
Class8 is lame and loss is their aim
Class9 has fame and victory their aim
Class9 rocks,
Class8 has no socks
Class9 is big and strong,
Class8 is weak and always wrong
Class8 is a baby with a lollipop to suck,
Class9 is brave with lots of luck!
I hope that's good enough! and nice poems, lemon and podlepop!
In class 9, Everyone understands! Everyone in class 9 is intelligent, nice and wealthy!
In class 8, No one understands!
Everyone in class 8 is lazy, dumb and poor!
Class 8 can't talk
Class 9 can talk every single language!
Class 8 have no brain!
Class 9 have 11 brains!
Class 8 can't walk
Class 9 can defy gravity!!
Class 8 stinks
Class 9 rocks like stone!
What's wrong with being poor?
Lol...
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